A week ago, my novel's second chapter sucked. I felt that hopelessness that all but the most cocky fiction writer's sometimes face. What was I doing wrong?
I edited my way through the chapter and realized that minor edits were not going to save my meandering mass of words. My MC, Kristian, needed something that I was not giving him. He needed a "scene purpose." He needed to attain it or not attain it, not just wander around Helsinki, meeting a vast array of interesting characters.
A "scene purpose", defined in the book Plot &Structure by James Bell, on page 114 is "may be anything that is a step in achieving the story goal." So I took this advice. I gave Kristian an idea how to stop his dad from keeping him in Finland. This idea pulled the chapter together like string. In giving my MC a purpose, I had, inadvertantly, given myself one too. I knew which characters needed to be chopped. I knew why Kristian needed to visit his cousin's house.
Now this chapter needs more work, but the rambley, "why am I reading this" feeling was gone. I am back on track - Thanks, Mr. Bell.
Can't wait to read it!
ReplyDeleteHe was lost, and now he's found. Nice job!
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